Meghan, this is wonderful! Just looking through the first 20 pages is fascinating and helpful. And it’s great to see discussion between you and Rhonda.  It makes very plain the value of “two sets of eyes” as I think you put it sometime in our earlier correspondence.

I won’t do any revisions. I am eager for the whole document. So glad for you two sharp-eyed editors to be on my case.

Many thanks for the preview!